Out in the Rain 02
Aug14
on August 14, 2018
at 11:42 pm
Sorry for missing an update everyone, I was in my yearly family vacation in Czech Republic, Austria, and Hungary (this last one was a big inspiration for the mythology of TGK’s world, along with the British Isles and Scandinavia) and couldn’t upload last Monday.
Anyhow, I hope the first 6 panels are clear, I tried to do something a bit clever, but it might have turned confusing: On the third panel, I intended the eye to move to the one directly bellow, then follow the word balloons right-to-left.
Anyway, TGK will be going back to regular uploads from now on
It took me a little while to figure out it did that (an arrow is always helpful, you couldve had a big u-turn arrow decorated with like flowers and calligraphic flourishes) but I did get it. Also just fantastic page, I love getting this stuff.
It took me a bit too. It would help, I think, if the speech bubble about spending too much time on books was clearly attached to the bottom panel rather than the top. It would probably also help to have the speech bubbles slightly closer together, and to have the panels consistently move downwards when going back on the second row, but what’s most important is guiding the eye to that fourth panel right away.
He wasn’t unharmed for long!