A Brief Peace 03
Jun27
on June 27, 2022
at 7:04 pm
Oh man, now here’s something I won’t try to do again.
Third row in intended to be read right to left; I thought I could direct the eye with the word baloons, but I doesn’t quite work so sorry about that everyone!
Nice touch of having Margie’s parents “hop” along on her shoulders!
Thanks! In retrospect I should have had the rest of the Frog family be more present in the story when I had the chance
Yeah, it indeed didn’t work. I think it can be salvaged, though.
Switch the “I’ve very happy for you” speech bubble and its siblings to the other side (by the way, it should be “I’m very happy for you”), overlapping a bit on the bottom right of the first panel — it’s not like there’s anything important next to the chest anyway. That the fourth and fifth panel can be put in proper order.
I made a mockup of what I mean in Paint. Obviously I don’t have the original art with speech bubbles on a separate layer so it’s just a mockup.
i.imgur.com/O23RNMK.png
That’s actually a really nice edit! Should have been what I did instead
I might actually take my time one day to do something similar to this page once I finish the chapter I’m currently working on
I actually followed it okay, with a little trouble. Sometimes comics gotta just do what they gotta do to get the events out.
The Fire.. three?
I blame english speaker for having the two words being so similar